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Cambridge (GTB) page 128. Task 1. Dear mr.john,. I am writing to appreciate you
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I am writing to appreciate you for sentsending me some pictures of holiday.
Comment [A1]: Better Option: holiday photos
Went When I received their pictures by mail, I got extremely/so happy a lot and as soon as I immediately opened the pocket envelope and saw them. The holiday spent passed very early too soon but I think if I see the pictures each several times, those memoirs will got get refresh me.
Comment [A2]: Whose?
I apologizes that I write letter very late I was very busy I had four office meetings. There fore, I must prepare some lectures. Next month, I have three days off. Could you and other friends, that I will call them and I ask them that they ready to come my city. We will spend gather together. I think we will enjoy ourselves. I will wait your reply if you have other recommend please tell me with prone or e-mail I will coordinate with to other friends and I know other friends have free jobs and they don’t have any problems for coming
Comment [A3]: Not understandable Comment [A4]: Too much usage of “I” Comment [A5]: preposition
Yours sincerely, Saeed Book 7 ielts Cambridge (GTB) page 128 Task 2 We know doing big works causes to demonstrateing too many much expense, for example,s such as the entertainers from doing famous works the same mention topic. They There are advantages and disadvantage this subject.
Comment [A6]: not countable
But advantages?!, entertainers from these ceremonies can say publicity far famous musicians and actor & actress and encourage other people especially adolescents so these programs. They have good qualificationy because there are famous peoples that they play them and more people like to see them. Therefore, they want to pay too much money for see these ceremonies. Thus there are many persons like to investment in these entertainers because they earn much money in this business. Also some of the other jobs such as entertainer from scientificst meetings and the end of the years festival celebration, and etc. have more cost for to celebrateion.
Comment [A7]: mere translation from mother toungue
But disadvantages?! , some of the jobs to pay too much money but there are not any profit for others and they only have negative publicity even these jobs can destroy young people . I saw AFARINESH IELTS House-IELTS-House.com – tel:021-88640490
some of entertainers that they were not successful in programs because they don’t use of cleaver people and they use from amateur persons they did not study the different respects of this matter and for pay less cost In conclusion, I think jobs that have different respects for others they must be paid pay more expenses and against and entertainers have good effect and profit others although they have more costs for performance them but they can appropriate for society and juveniles. Estimated Band Score: 4.5 Suggestions: 1. You have to boost you grammar power. 2. You are so much under the influence of your first language; try to read books and articles in English
