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Push in on magazine "slap your ass" - Main Title Graphic. "JOEL McHALE". VID ... T Shirt reads "Save the Fucking Earth" [shot continues for a few seconds]. VID.
FINAL AIRLINE EDIT NOTES Company: Fox In Flight Customer ID# 12437 Client: Tammy Wange Feature TRT: New Edit TRT: 102:34

Standard: NTSC / DFTC Format: DBC WO#346834

TITLE: WHAT'S YOUR NUMBER? Master TC 01:00:52:02

Edit TC 01:00:48:25 01:00:52:09

Character

01:00:57:08 01:01:04:01 01:01:08:16

01:01:04:22 01:01:07:05

01:01:08:16

01:01:09:17

01:01:14:03

01:01:15:10

01:02:04:23

01:02:06:09

Ally

01:02:57:02

01:02:54:19

Boyfriend Rick

01:02:58:28

01:02:58:23

Boyfriend Rick

01:03:03:25

01:03:02:19

01:03:07:17

Description Magazine reads: "Does a bear crap in the woods?" Magazine reads: "4 What's his idea of kinky sex?" multiple choice answers-- Main title "What's Your Number" Magazine reads: "4 What's his idea of kinky sex?" multiple choice answers-- Main title "What's Your Number" Magazine reads " C) Slap your ass" Push in on magazine "slap your ass" - Main Title Graphic "JOEL McHALE" Push in on magazine "slap your ass" - Main Title Graphic "JOEL McHALE" Push in on magazine "be a dude --- not a douche"

Type VID

ADR ADS EDIT NOTES GFX: created "crud" from crap GFX: painted out kinky and moved "sex"

VID

GFX: painted out kinky and moved "sex"

VID VID

GFX: remove the "r" in your and "ass" GFX: remove the "r" in your and "ass"

VID

GFX: remove the "r" in your and "ass"

VID

Fixes her breasts in her shirt and pushes them up a bit

VID

VID VID

graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

Boyfriend Rick

T Shirt reads "Save the Fucking Earth" [shot continues for a few seconds] Close up Shot- of t-shirt with slogan "Save the Fucking Earth" Back to shot of t-shirt with slogan "Save the Fucking Earth"

GFX: removed the "d" and "e" and added an "n" so it says "an ouch" cut the shot(s) of her out of the sequence. Slipped the music to the left to compensate graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

VID

graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

01:03:07:14

Boyfriend Rick

Back to shot of t-shirt with slogan "Save the Fucking Earth"

VID

graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

01:03:15:07

01:03:15:03

Boyfriend Rick

Back to shot of t-shirt with slogan "Save the Fucking Earth"

VID

graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

01:03:28:09

01:03:26:18

Ally

AUD

Cut dialogue after "last night"

01:03:29:02

01:03:28:00

Boyfriend Rick

"It felt kind of serious last night when you were doing me from behind" Back to shot of t-shirt with slogan "Save the Fucking Earth"

VID

graphics to paint out "FUCKING"

01:03:54:22

01:03:51:19

Colin Shea

Opens the door in a small towel only- side butt shots

VID

01:03:59:14 01:04:19:11

01:03:51:19 01:04:10:02

Colin Shea Daisy Darling

VID AUD

01:07:05:17 01:08:12:24 01:08:18:01

01:06:55:26 01:08:02:16 01:08:06:20

Ally Ally Ally

Opens the door in a small towel only- side butt shots "I was a little concerned with you always wanting to do it doggiesstyle" "10.5 holy shit" in her bra and panties, unhooks her bra (shot of her back) steps out of the shower naked

VID VID VID

X

01:09:34:22

01:09:20:12

Daisy Darling

AUD

X

01:10:15:01 01:10:36:28 01:11:11:11 01:11:57:19

01:10:01:12 01:10:22:06 01:10:53:16 01:11:37:12

Ally Ally Ally Ally

"Mom has been such a bitch ever since Eddie's parents got here" "I don’t know, what rhymes with orgy?" "holy shit" "Careful. He can be a little rough on the nipples" "Eddie Vogel the shmuck you went out in highschool. He was the biggest douchbag of them all."

trim the tail of the shot before he is fully in the door resized shot dropped dialogue-- cannot cut as it's a title shot replaced with "holy cheese" trimmed shot before she runs by cut from her inside the shower to the CU of her writing replaced with "witch"

AUD AUD AUD AUD

X X X

01:15:15:28

01:14:54:24

Jamie

"He only stuck it in a little bit" Demonstrates how big

AUD

01:15:18:18

01:14:54:24

Jamie

Demonstrates how far it went in

dropped orgy replaced with "holy cheese" replaced with "boobies" removed "the shmuck you wnet out with in high school" replaced doughbag with dirtbag Cut scene from Jamie saying "no" to "at-a girl"

FINAL AIRLINE EDIT NOTES Company: Fox In Flight Customer ID# 12437 Client: Tammy Wange Feature TRT: New Edit TRT: 102:34

Standard: NTSC / DFTC Format: DBC WO#346834

Cut scene from Jamie saying "no" to "at-a girl"

TITLE: WHAT'S YOUR NUMBER? Master TC 01:15:23:09

Edit TC 01:14:54:24

Character Ally

Description "I don't know how large his penis is?"

Type

01:15:32:22

01:14:54:24

01:15:43:22

Jamie

"shit, 9"

AUD

01:15:04:25

Daisy Darling

"whore"

AUD

01:15:45:04

01:15:09:08

Jamie

"slut" x2

AUD

01:15:48:21 01:15:52:11

01:15:09:08 01:15:11:24

Ally Katie

"slutty whore" "that is 13 different penises in one vagina"

AUD

X

01:17:04:26 01:17:10:27 00:17:55:04

01:16:20:11 01:16:26:00 01:17:08:28

Katie Ally Ally

AUD AUD VID

X

01:18:46:01

01:17:55:12

Roger the Boss

"Hey, that magazine taught me how to orgasm" "oh shit" Pointing to her vagina as she says "the next guy that vacations at casa esperanza is going to be my husband" Grabs her cleavage (no visible nudity)

01:19:02:07 01:19:03:18 01:19:10:08

01:18:01:19 01:18:01:19 01:18:02:13

Roger the Boss Ally Ally

Has no pants on - visible butt "Oh shit" Side boob as she puts on her shirt

VID AUD VID

01:19:11:23 01:19:16:05 01:19:17:06 01:19:18:07 01:19:24:24 01:19:36:06 01:19:46:08 01:19:47:08 01:19:59:09 01:22:05:14 01:22:06:11 01:22:19:22 01:22:53:00 01:23:09:11 01:23:29:11 01:25:47:20

01:18:02:13 01:18:07:13 01:18:07:13 01:18:15:01 01:18:19:28 01:18:26:13 01:18:36:16 01:18:37:20 01:18:49:15 01:20:52:14 01:20:54:19 01:21:06:22 01:21:40:09 01:21:55:24 01:22:15:25 01:24:33:02

Ally Roger the Boss Ally Roger the Boss Roger the Boss Roger the Boss Roger the Boss Ally Roger the Boss Colin Shea Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Daisy Darling

small amount of butt showing as she gets up butt in shot possible panty shot butt in shot (blurred already) butt in shot (blurred already) butt crack in shot as he gets upfrom bed and bends over butt crack in shot as he gets upfrom bed and bends over "I know you're just being a bitch" reaches inside pants to adjust crotch "no shit" "shit" "those bitches put my toast up on you tube" "this shits good" "because of that finger smelling fuck I'm at 20" "shit" "I mean you said it yourself Eddie use to be a total douche"

VID VID VID VID VID VID VID AUD VID AUD AUD AUD AUD AUD AUD AUD

01:26:48:16 01:26:57:08 01:27:03:16 01:27:06:04 01:27:09:12

01:25:35:16 01:25:44:09 01:25:49:25 01:25:49:25 01:26:00:26

Ally Ally

"holy shit" "what the fuck" Google Search "Big Balls, Tiny Penis" Porn site pops up on computer screen Porn site pops up - nudity

AUD AUD VID VID VID

01:27:23:29

01:26:00:26

dancing penis and hairy balls animation

VID

01:27:38:15 01:27:50:09

01:26:15:12 01:26:32:29

"oh… balls" Opens the door in a small towel only

AUD VID

Ally Colin Shea

ADR ADS EDIT NOTES

X

replaced with "floozie, you're a dirty girl" replaced with "floozie, you're a dirty girl"

VID

X X X X X X X X X

X

replaced with "floozie tramp" cut from "whats the big deal" line to "It's not like they were all in there at the same time" remove line replaced with "oh geez" resized shot to diminish the hand motion trim the head of the shot, placed a dip from white to create a longer flash so you still have the big reveal removed shot removed shot trimmed head of shot so she has most of the shirt on trimmed shot at the end trimmed shot head resize blur resize/blow up resize/blow up resize/blow up replaced with "witch" trim the crotch grabbing shot replaced with "way" replaced with "way" replaced with "witches" removed "shit" replaced with "shmuck" replaced with "shoot" replaced with "dirtbag" "holy cheese" replaced with "heck" trim trim trim and go out on music note to black from theatrical Created a black graphic over the animation (1 hr) replaced with "PORN" resized and trim shot

FINAL AIRLINE EDIT NOTES Company: Fox In Flight Customer ID# 12437 Client: Tammy Wange Feature TRT: New Edit TRT: 102:34

Standard: NTSC / DFTC Format: DBC WO#346834

TITLE: WHAT'S YOUR NUMBER? Master TC 01:27:55:17

Edit TC 01:26:32:29

Character Colin Shea

01:28:22:22

01:26:57:26

Colin Shea

01:28:51:25

01:27:27:01

Colin Shea

01:29:57:10 01:31:05:18 01:32:20:09 01:32:22:28

01:28:32:07 01:29:40:11 01:30:51:29 01:30:51:29

Colin Shea Ally Sheila Sheila

01:32:23:19 01:32:30:07

01:30:51:29 01:30:51:29

Eileen Eileen

01:34:56:16 01:38:26:16 01:38:33:19

01:33:07:25 01:36:39:12 01:36:46:05

Ally Colin Shea Ally

01:39:03:04

01:37:15:04

Donald

01:41:56:23 01:44:37:27

01:40:07:06 01:42:49:08

01:49:01:21 01:49:20:19 01:49:25:14

01:47:00:13 01:47:03:09 01:47:18:29

Dr. and Ally Ally Ally

01:50:04:24 01:50:12:24

01:48:01:04 01:48:07:13

Ally Daisy Darling

01:54:23:09

01:52:19:03

Ally

01:55:02:12

01:52:53:23

01:55:09:07 01:55:12:28 01:55:40:09

Description Stands in the hall in a small towel only covering parts of him. Side butt Stands in the hall in a small towel only covering parts of him. Side butt Back in front of his door with the small towel covering him. Side butt "Jesus" "… you dress like a horny teenager" "he's not going to be able to find your vagina" "and forget about 69"

Type VID

"she's not going to 69" "69's are for when you're 17 and you're trying to cram everything at once before your parents come home" "puts on a vinyl cat suit and fucks you sideways" "how's your blow job?" "well if you know know it's pretty good it's the hand job I haven't figured out" "Ally, what the fuck are you doing in my home?"

AUD AUD

ADR ADS EDIT NOTES resized and trim shot

VID

Blur

VID

Blow up / resize

AUD AUD AUD AUD

removed word removed "horny" removed all conversation and video regarding the "69"

AUD AUD AUD

X X X

AUD

replaced fuck with "does" replaced "blow" with "bone" replaced "job" with "thing" trimmed "the fuck" out, trimmed a few frames of video, moved audio over replaced with "bleeding hell" removed scene

Ally "bloody hell" Ally and Jerry Perry in bed together, having sex, fully clothed-- a puppet pops up

AUD VID VID AUD AUD

X X

replaced "vagina" with "privates" replaced "assholes" with "whackos"

AUD AUD

X

removed Jesus replaced with "P"

AUD

X

replaced balls with "butt"

Ally

POV shot as the gynecologist examines her "he recognized my vagina" "what am I doing? Unemployed, spending every last dime trying to track down these assholes that already broke up with me." "Jesus, tell me you're not naked" "luckiliy he doesn’t like to play with his shorts because the guitar gets cold against his penis." "you would'nt know a gentleman if he tiptoed up behind you and tickled your balls" cleavage showing in the red tight dress

01:53:04:20

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID

01:53:09:22 01:53:36:05 01:53:57:06 01:54:18:05

Ally Ally Ally Ally Tom Piper

VID VID VID VID VID

VID

01:57:20:07

01:54:38:27 01:55:02:05

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress gestures his hands to similate a bunch of penis surround him as he says "I'm super gay" cleavage showing in the red tight dress

01:57:24:04

01:55:02:05

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID

01:57:30:29 01:57:36:20

01:55:02:05 01:55:06:10

Ally Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID VID

01:56:47:08

VID

X

GFX: build more of the dress to remove cleavage GFX: build more of the dress to remove cleavage trim shot early to lesson shots resize/ blow up resize/ blow up resize/ blow up trimmed scene to remove hand gestures removed scene when Ally walks up the stairwell removed scene when Ally walks up the stairwell GFX: darken the area to create a shadow GFX: build more of the dress to remove cleavage

FINAL AIRLINE EDIT NOTES Company: Fox In Flight Customer ID# 12437 Client: Tammy Wange Feature TRT: New Edit TRT: 102:34

Standard: NTSC / DFTC Format: DBC WO#346834

TITLE: WHAT'S YOUR NUMBER? Master TC 01:57:40:01

Edit TC 01:55:12:16

Character Ally

Description cleavage showing in the red tight dress

Type VID

ADR ADS EDIT NOTES GFX: build more of the dress to remove cleavage GFX: build more of the dress to remove cleavage resize/ blow up resize/ blow up resize/ blow up resize/ blow up resize/ blow up resize/ blow up removed -- "whooaaa, I have to go to my sisters wedding alone" trim scene of them walking into the garden blow up/resize

01:57:45:14

01:55:18:10

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID

01:57:51:09 01:57:56:18 01:58:07:20 01:58:13:09 01:58:46:26 01:58:55:15 01:59:44:13

01:55:25:18 01:55:34:20 01:55:40:09 01:56:13:28 01:56:19:03 01:56:25:14 01:57:06:05

Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress cleavage showing in the red tight dress "oh shit"

VID VID VID VID VID VID AUD

02:00:33:10

01:57:39:24

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID

02:00:47:06

01:57:45:11

Ally

cleavage showing in the red tight dress

VID

02:00:55:16

01:57:54:27

Colin Shea

"I may or my not have pissed in his pot of gold"

AUD

02:02:25:22

01:58:09:28 01:59:05:10

Ally

VID AUD

removed shot, kep in a close up of her top half Cut the song and dropped the "shit"

02:02:42:23 02:02:45:25 02:02:49:12 02:02:57:01 02:02:59:02 02:03:08:23 02:04:32:24 02:04:42:09 02:04:44:13 02:04:44:29 02:04:45:25 02:04:49:14 02:04:51:26 02:05:22:26 02:05:43:29 02:05:44:09 02:05:49:19 02:05:59:29 02:06:27:21 02:06:33:05 02:06:38:01 02:06:47:01 02:08:03:00 02:08:05:17 02:09:36:14 02:10:04:26 02:10:11:09

01:59:24:27 01:59:33:23 01:59:34:16 01:59:34:29 01:59:42:17 01:59:43:28 02:01:04:22 02:01:04:22 02:01:09:12 02:01:09:12 02:01:12:12 02:01:14:03 02:01:16:16 02:01:47:23 02:01:55:29 02:01:55:29 02:02:06:22 02:02:15:01 02:02:25:02 02:02:29:27 02:02:56:18 02:02:56:18 02:04:07:09 02:04:09:23 02:05:40:27 02:06:09:00 02:06:15:19

Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally and Colin Ally and Colin Ally Ally and Colin Ally and Colin Ally and Colin Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Colin Shea Colin Shea Ally Ally Daisy Darling Eileen Daisy Darling

dressed in bra and panties Song lyrics to "LET THE BEAT ROCK"... "ape shit"; "I'm on that next shit now"; "Shittin' on y'all you with the boom boom" bra and panties, from behind bra and panties, from behind shot of bra is only dressed in bra and panties shot of bra dressed in their underwear playing basketball remove their underwear as they run towards the water slight side boob naked from the back as they jump in the water. naked side profile shot as they jump in the water. naked- another angle- as they jump in the water. Breasts and Nipple out of water "holy fuck this is fucking cold" nipples through her wet white shirt nipple silhouette nipples through her wet white shirt nipple silhouette shadow breast nipple through shirt open chest "what if I just put it in a little bit?" gestures to penis size "shit I can't breast exposed through shirt "you invited Colin? Your rapey neighbor" "except his name is Doug and he's a fucking liar" "if he wanted to come in through the backdoor you'd let him"

VID VID VID VID VID VID VID VID VID VID VID VID AUD VID VID VID VID VID VID VID AUD VID AUD VID AUD AUD AUD

trimmed shot trimmed shot removed removed removed trimmed scene trim end of shot removed blow up/ resize removed removed - goes right into the splash blurred "oh my gosh this is freaking cold" soft blur additive soft blur additive resized shot, added blur trimmed head and resize recreated shadow blur created white light from window and cut shot before we see her breasts cut to Colin going okay cut to Colin going okay replaced with "shoot" blur removed "rapey" replaced with "filthy" created "door" from backdoor

02:11:39:23

02:07:44:11

Colin Shea

"shiiiiiiit"

AUD

X

X

X X

X

replaced with "gone"

replaced with "shoot"

FINAL AIRLINE EDIT NOTES Company: Fox In Flight Customer ID# 12437 Client: Tammy Wange Feature TRT: New Edit TRT: 102:34

Standard: NTSC / DFTC Format: DBC WO#346834

TITLE: WHAT'S YOUR NUMBER? Master TC 02:13:06:12

Edit TC 02:09:08:17

Character Ally

02:13:11:17 02:13:12:16 02:14:36:09 02:15:38:08

02:09:14:19 02:09:17:03 02:10:41:08 02:11:42:28

Neighbor Ally Statue Statue

02:22:30:14 02:27:44:24

02:18:35:06 02:23:48:29

Eva Darling Ally

02:31:06:19 02:32:51:16 02:34:11:35

02:27:11:03 02:28:54:29 02:30:16:00

Eddie Ally Ally

02:37:08:07 02:37:18:12 02:37:20:03 02:38:32:00 02:39:25:08

02:33:08:18 02:33:18:26 02:33:20:27 02:34:29:05 02:35:23:07

Ally Ally Justin Little Kids Ally

02:39:30:02

02:35:30:10

Colin Shea

02:41:09:08

02:36:51:16

Jay

Description "I'm someone who is not going to let an underserving asshole into my heart or my vagina." "shut the fuck up" "stop fucking your dog" statue has a naked butt crack statue has a naked butt crack (and baby butt)

Type AUD

"Christ why is this happening to me" "why are you going to rape and kill me?

AUD AUD

"oh shit" "I'm a jobless whore that has slept with 20 guys" pulls up her dress and you can see her bear butt as she runs

AUD AUD VID

"this is bullshit" "FUCK" "FUCK FUCK FUCK" "fuck fuck, fuckity fuck fuck" (little song) "I guess I was just so afraid that you were another asshole that I became the biggest asshole of all" "You were'nt an asshole. I’m the asshole"

AUD AUD AUD AUD AUD

"you gave me a shitty handjob"

AUD

AUD AUD VID VID

AUD

ADR ADS EDIT NOTES X replaced with "jacks". Vagina dropped X X

X

X X X X

replaced with "shut up will you?" replaced with "stop doing your dog" GFX: remove butt crack GFX: remove butt crack

dropped Christ dropped "rape" and created line "why? Are you going to kill me" dropped "shit" (it was under his breath) replaced with "girl" cut shot of her bear butt replaced with "bull" replaced with "fudge" replaced with "fudge" replaced song with laughter replaced "asshole" with "jack"-- cannot use ADR as it is "jackass" created "jack" from ADR. Could not use "jack" cut the line from the voice message recording-- could not use ADR as it was not original actor (Aziz Ansari)